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2015-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My terrifying experience that i was young is that day i was going to the park with my familiy but i saw stripe creture and i though it was a snake but my mom said it was a rope but I feel strange and jump to over and i saw the face it was snake.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Alice.
Oh my god! What a terrifying story.

If I was in your shoes at that time, I don\'t know what to do.

Maybe I\'m going to freak out and run. Hihihihi.

I am really scared of snakes.

Thank you for sharing about your experience to me.

Have a good day.
Teacher Nina


My terrifying experience that i was young is that day i was going to the park with my familiy

>> My terrifying experience happened when I was young. I was going to the park with my family on that day.

>> OR: My terrifying experience happened when I was young. I was on my way to the park with my family on that day.

but i saw stripe creture and i though it was a snake but my mom said it was a rope

>> I saw a striped creature and I thought it was a snake, but my mom said it was just a rope.
but I feel strange and jump to over
and i saw the face it was snake.

>> But I felt strange and jumped over it. I saw the face and it was a snake.

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