Homework

Hello, teacher. Now, I can feel the wind starts to breeze up due to a typhoon. According to the weather forecast, there is heavy rain in the south region of Korea. When night comes, it would rain here in Seoul. Anyway, below is today's homework. Should boys and girls be in separate classes in school? Why or why not? I don't think that boys and girls should be in separate classes in school. At one time, it used to be common that boys and girls were in separate classes in school here in Korea. However, the numbers of coeducation schools have been increasing. Concerning two facts that schools have a role to teach socializing and communicating with other people, and man and woman are all the members of our society, getting along with other gender is very important. In conclusion, it is natural and recommended for boys and girls to study together in the same class.

Hi Kaylee! Great job in this homework. You\'ve made a good point and I totally agree with your opinion. Please review my corrections below. Be safe! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Now, I can feel the wind starts to breeze up due to a typhoon. >> Now I can feel the breeze blowing hard due to the typhoon. According to the weather forecast, there is heavy rain in the south region of Korea. >> CORRECT! When night comes, it would rain here in Seoul. >> CORRECT! OR >> At night, it would rain here in Seoul. Anyway, below is today\'s homework.>> CORRECT! I don\'t think that boys and girls should be in separate classes in school. >> CORRECT! At one time, it used to be common that boys and girls were in separate classes in school here in Korea. >> CORRECT! However, the numbers of coeducation schools have been increasing. >> CORRECT! >> Co-educationConcerning two facts that schools have a role to teach socializing and communicating with other people, and man and woman are all the members of our society, getting along with other gender is very important. >> Considering the fact that a school\'s role is to teach socializing and communicating and that both men and women are equal members of our society, getting along with the opposite gender is very important. In conclusion, it is natural and recommended for boys and girls to study together in the same class. >> CORRECT!