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In my case my toy is computer.I usually play with computer.I like watching soccer game and play games.It is fun.This day I like baseball game too. I think sports game is very interesting. My soccer team and basball team changed. Now my soccer team is Bayern Munich. And my baseball team change into KIA.

Hi [이름]!   I am always having fun reading about your day. I learn a lot from you when you share your stories. At such a young age, it seems like you already know what interests you. This is actually great because some of the people I know still doubt their interests. kkk   Are you planning to be a P.E major soon? kkkk   [Uh-oh, seems like you forgot to put a space after the puntuation marks again]     ~~T. Kris~~   In my case my toy is computer. >> In my case, computer is my toy. I usually play with computer. >> I usually play computer games. I like watching soccer game and play games. >> I like watching soccer games and play it too. It is fun. >> CORRECT! OR: It is enjoyable. This day I like baseball game too. >> These days, I like baseball game too. [do not forget to use comma] I think sports game is very interesting. >> CORRECT! OR: I think, sports game is amusing. My soccer team and basball team changed. >> My soccer and baseball teams have changed. Now my soccer team is Bayern Munich. >> CORRECT! BETTER: Now, I am with the soccer team, Bayern Munich. And my baseball team change into KIA. >> And my baseball team changed into KIA.