homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hello Jane!
thank you today although it was noisy.
see you tomorrow!
Nothing is as obnoxious as betrayal.
When somebody that I believe is betray, I will be very angry and frustrated.
If somebody betray me, I will finish our relationship.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! I appreciate your effort yesterday because you did your best to communicate with me despite your schedule. Keep it up! Take care and talk to you later!
T. JanE ^^
Hello Jane!>> Correct
thank you today although it was noisy.>> Thank you for today because you talked with me despite the noise on the background.
See you tomorrow!>> Correct Nothing is as obnoxious as betrayal.>> Correct
When somebody that I believe is betray, I will be very angry and frustrated.>> When someone I trust betrays me, I will be very angry and frustrated.
If somebody betray me, I will finish our relationship.
>> If somebody betrays me, I will end our relationship.
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