Homework

Hello, teacher. As I told you today, I'm leaving to Gyeongju this afternoon. I already completed my paper and submitted it ten days ago. There is only one thing left to present it well.^^ After participating this conference, I will visit Bulguksa Temple in Gyeongju. I will tell you about it later. What age is appropriate for dating? Why? Concerning this Question, I am kind of conservative. In my opinion, it is desirable to start to date after graduating from high school. Many young people may complain about it, but in Korea, where entering a university can determine rest of their lives, focusing on their study is very important in their school days. I would recommend to date after entering a university. That's not to say I disagree getting along with friends having other gender. I just should tell them that there are many important things to do, besides dating with someone.

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for submitting your homework early. Good luck with the conference. Hope everything goes well. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! As I told you today, I\'m leaving to Gyeongju this afternoon. >> As I told you today, I\'m leaving for Gyeongju this afternoon.I already completed my paper and submitted it ten days ago. >> CORRECT! There is only one thing left to present it well.^^ >> CORRECT! After participating in this conference, I will visit Bulguksa Temple in Gyeongju. >> CORRECT! I will tell you about it later.>> CORRECT! Concerning this Question, I am kind of conservative. >> Regarding this question, I am kind of conservative.In my opinion, it is desirable to start to date after graduating from high school. >> CORRECT! Many young people may complain about it, but in Korea, where entering a university can determine rest of their lives, focusing on their study is very important in their school days. >> Many young people may complain about it, but in Korea, entering a good university can determine the rest of their lives, so focusing on their studies is very important. I would recommend them to date after entering a university. >> CORRECT! That\'s not to say I disagree getting along with friends having other gender. >> That\'s not to say that I disagree with hanging out with friends from the opposite gender.I just should tell them that there are many important things to do, besides dating with someone. >> I should just tell them that there are more important things to do than dating someone.