homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Thanks for today's lesson!!
I'm going to remember the word "seminar"^^
You are right! I am not a party person..hehe I think so.
When I was young, I liked to have big parties on my birhdays..but now I don't like to
make my birthday into a big event..Maybe I am being matual...hehe
Hearing "happy birthday" or some presents which are from their hearts are enough to
make me the most important person. I can feel that many people around me love me.^^
Thanks alot!
Have a good day!
1) She's a flute player.
She plays the flute.
2) We are cello players.
We play the cello.
3) He is a guitarist.
He plays the guitar.
4) They are trumpet players.
They play the trumpet.
5) I'm a saxophone player.
I play the saxophone.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Miss [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on birthdays. It\'s true, as we get older birthday parties become simpler. I am glad to hear that you are surrounded by many people who love you. Being surrounded by people like that make us feel happy and content everyday. ^^
By the way, I hope your nephew is doing well.
Take care, Miss [이름]. I\'ll see you soon!
Teacher Anne
Thanks for today\'s lesson!!
>> Correct!I\'m going to remember the word \"seminar\"^^
>>I\'m going to remember the word \"seminar\". ^^
You are right! I am not a party person..hehe I think so.
>> Correct!When I was young, I liked to have big parties on my birhdays
>>When I was young, I liked to have big parties on my birthdays.
..but now I don\'t like to make my birthday into a big event..Maybe I am being matual...hehe
>> But now, I don\'t like to make my birthday into a big event, maybe I am being mature...heheHearing \"happy birthday\" or some presents which are from their hearts are enough to make me the most important person.
>> Hearing, \"Happy Birthday!\" or receiving presents which are from their hearts are enough to make me feel like the most important person.
I can feel that many people around me love me.^^
>> Correct!Thanks alot!
>> Thanks a lot!Have a good day!
>> Correct!1) She\'s a flute player.She plays the flute.
>> Correct!2) We are cello players.We play the cello.
>> Correct!3) He is a guitarist.He plays the guitar.>> Correct!
4) They are trumpet players.They play the trumpet.
>> Correct! 5) I\'m a saxophone player.I play the saxophone.
>> Correct!
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