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2015-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Thanks for today's lesson!! I'm going to remember the word "seminar"^^ You are right! I am not a party person..hehe I think so. When I was young, I liked to have big parties on my birhdays..but now I don't like to make my birthday into a big event..Maybe I am being matual...hehe Hearing "happy birthday" or some presents which are from their hearts are enough to make me the most important person. I can feel that many people around me love me.^^ Thanks alot! Have a good day! 1) She's a flute player. She plays the flute. 2) We are cello players. We play the cello. 3) He is a guitarist. He plays the guitar. 4) They are trumpet players. They play the trumpet. 5) I'm a saxophone player. I play the saxophone.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Miss [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on birthdays. It\'s true, as we get older birthday parties become simpler. I am glad to hear that you are surrounded by many people who love you. Being surrounded by people like that make us feel happy and content everyday. ^^ By the way, I hope your nephew is doing well. Take care, Miss [이름]. I\'ll see you soon! Teacher Anne   Thanks for today\'s lesson!! >> Correct!I\'m going to remember the word \"seminar\"^^ >>I\'m going to remember the word \"seminar\". ^^ You are right! I am not a party person..hehe I think so. >> Correct!When I was young, I liked to have big parties on my birhdays >>When I was young, I liked to have big parties on my birthdays. ..but now I don\'t like to make my birthday into a big event..Maybe I am being matual...hehe >> But now, I don\'t like to make my birthday into a big event, maybe I am being mature...heheHearing \"happy birthday\" or some presents which are from their hearts are enough to make me the most important person. >> Hearing, \"Happy Birthday!\" or receiving presents which are from their hearts are enough to make me feel like the most important person. I can feel that many people around me love me.^^ >> Correct!Thanks alot! >> Thanks a lot!Have a good day! >> Correct!1) She\'s a flute player.She plays the flute. >> Correct!2) We are cello players.We play the cello. >> Correct!3) He is a guitarist.He plays the guitar.>> Correct! 4) They are trumpet players.They play the trumpet. >> Correct! 5) I\'m a saxophone player.I play the saxophone. >> Correct! 

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