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2015-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Jane when I arrived at home, I went to bed. So I wrote the writting now. hahahaha. When my parents fight sometimes, I have the most stress. Although every parents fight. But I don't want to see it. Sometimes when I saw it, I though that I really would like to go out at home.sometimes when I saw it, I though that I really would like to go out at home.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! It\'s really stressful to see our parents fighting. It has a really bad effect on children. I hope parents will be more careful and discreet when they argue. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane>> Correct When I arrived at home, I went to bed. >> I went to bed as soon as I arrived home.  So I wrote the writting now. hahahaha.>> That\'s why I am writing this now. When my parents fight sometimes, I have the most stress.>> I am so stressed when my parents fight.  Although every parents fight. But I don\'t want to see it.>> Althought all parents fight, I don\'t want to see it.  Sometimes when I saw it, I though that I really would like to go out at home. >> When I see them fight, sometimes I think that I really want tleave home. 

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