Homework(6/10): My childhood dream

Dear sam. I hope that you could start new business from at least Aug. I call the your manager about my plan to learn after this course. and I will say that i need you as my continuous teacher. By the way, i couldn't explain well about first-birthday party in Korea, therefore I would like to give additional explanation you. 1.parents invite close relatives, their friends and acquaintances who really knowing. 2. Then the invitee attend the party and gives some money or present such as golden ring. 3. The invitor have the best important event that their child pick up only one thing among the various somethings like thread , pencil, paper money, etc. - if the kid pick up thread, we think the kid will live long - pencil means a person good at studying and - money means the richer 4. All have a fun lunch or dinner at normally buffet. sam. Sorry for not writing essay today. I can't do writing essay because of limitation of character-numbers.

Hello  Oh,Thank you for sharing your opinion on our homework. I do appreciate you time in creating your essay although you need to check your sentence construction. Furthermore continue learning because this a step forward in achieving your goals.Take care!!! T.Jeny   Dear sam.>>correctI hope that you could start new business from at least Aug.>>I hope that you could start a new business in Aug. I call the your manager about my plan to learn after this course.>>I called your manager about my plans after this course. and I will say that i need you as my continuous teacher. >> and I also said that I need you as my teacher.By the way, i couldn\'t explain well about first-birthday party in Korea, therefore I would like to give additional explanation you. >>By the way, I couldn\'t explain well about  first-birthday party in Korea, therefore I would like to give additional explanations to you.1.parents invite close relatives, their friends and acquaintances who really knowing. >>parents invite close relatives, their friends and acquaintances whom they really know. 2. Then the invitee attend the party and gives some money or present such as golden ring. >>Then the guests will attend the party and give some money or present such as golden ring.3. The invitor have the best important event that their child pick up only one thing among the various somethings like thread , pencil, paper money, etc. >>This is a very important event for the host because his child will pick an item from few choices like thread, pencil, paper, money, etc.- if the kid pick up thread, we think the kid will live long >>If the kid picked a thread, it means he will live long.- pencil means a person good at studying and >>Pencil means a person who will study hard.- money means the richer >>Money means that he will be rich.4. All have a fun lunch or dinner at normally buffet.>>All of the guests will have a fun lunch or dinner at normal buffet restaurant.sam. >>correctSorry for not writing essay today. >>Sorry for not writing an essay today.I can\'t do writing essay because of limitation of character-numbers. >>I can\'t write an essay because the number of characters are limited.