Homework 6
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. How is the coronavirus affecting your life?
A1. The coronavirus has changed our life very much. This situation has brought positive changes such as the development of technology. However there are also negative changes so far.
Since the coronavirus occured from China, our company had paid attention to what\'s going on. As most of tourism bisnesses are attacked by the disease, our company has been suffered from it as well. The employees took turns to take a month off so that our company can make ends meet. Even though I had a long vacation, the disease prevented me from traveling and keep me stay at home. Besides, I really feel like going abroad to travel, but I\'m worried about teasing by foreigners who think that the cause of the disease is the Asian. And the current trend is not to contact each other face to face, so called \"Untact\", which I think sad and soulless. I hope that this situation will come to an end and the day when we can meet will come in no time.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! I like what you shared here. You have an excellent input on the matter. The situation has really caused a lot of trouble not only on an individual level but in a very great scale. Indeed, social distancing is the new norm which given a thought sounds cruel. That\'s why people have coined the term \"physical distancing\" that we must use instead of amplifying the phrase \"social distancing\"! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT (*our lives)
This situation has brought positive changes such as the development of technology.
>>CORRECT
However there are also negative changes so far.
>>CORRECT
Since the coronavirus occured from China, our company had paid attention to what\'s going on.
Since the coronavirus occured from China, our company had paid attention to what\'s going on.
>>Ever since the outbreak began in China, my company has paid so much attention about what\'s going on.
As most of tourism bisnesses are attacked by the disease, our company has been suffered from it as well.
>>As most tourism businesses have been affected by the outbreak, my company has suffered from it as well.
The employees took turns to take a month off so that our company can make ends meet.
>>CORRECT
Even though I had a long vacation, the disease prevented me from traveling and keep me stay at home.
>>Even though I had a long vacation, the disease prevented me from traveling and kept me home.
Besides, I really feel like going abroad to travel, but I\'m worried about teasing by foreigners who think that the cause of the disease is the Asian.
>>I really want to travel abroad, but I\'m worried of possible physical or verbal attacks from other foreigners who think that Asian people caused the outbreak.
And the current trend is not to contact each other face to face, so called \"Untact\", which I think sad and soulless.
>>And the current trend is to not have any close contact or encounter and is now popularly termed as \"Untact\" which I believe sounds and feels like sad and soulless.
I hope that this situation will come to an end and the day when we can meet will come in no time.
>>CORRECT
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