Homework(6/2) : the most attractive in people of the opposite sex.
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Hello Oh!!!!
Once again, thank you for your homework. Your answers are full of life. You gave a lot of insights:) I can see that you really like to learn.
I do know that you are busy with work so don\'t worry about it.
T. Jeny
Dear sam.
>>correct
I could not take a lesson today morning.
>>I could not take a lesson this morning.
There was a urgent meeting and there was the beginning error of the month, June.
>>There was an urgent meeting because there was an error in the beginning of the month of June.
I\'m sorry about the inconvenience to call me several times.
>>I\'m sorry about the inconvenience of calling me several times.
I seem to be able to take a lesson tomorrow.
>>It seems like I can take a lesson tomorrow.
Have a nice day.
>>correct
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What I find most attractive in people of the opposite sex are her mind, good heart and understanding me.
>>What I find most attractive in people of the opposite sex are her mind, good heart and understanding.
People who has a good heart is always a good laugh.
>>A person who has a good heart is always a good laugh.
If she is pretty, I attract to a double.
>>If she is pretty, I am more attracted to her.
>>If she is pretty, it\'s a plus.
If she\'s pretty but has not good shape, I am not attracted about her.
>>If she\'s pretty but doesn\'t have good shape, I am not attracted to her.
I always emphasize this my view point to my daughter.
>>I always emphasize my view point to my daughter.
>>I always emphasize my point of view to my daughter.T
The reason is that i hope my daughter want to receive love from future her husband.
>>The reason is that I hope my daughter will be loved by her future husband.
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