Homework(6/22): leadership
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강사 첨삭
Hi there! I received your composition. Great job for doing your homework!
I hope you\'ll be consistently diligent in all the tasks I\'m giving you.
Keep on writing!
Here are the corrections I made for you
~T. Jeny~
Dear sam.
>>correct
I am glad to start again new course and Thanks for being together with you.
>>I am glad to start new course with you again. Thank you!
Thanks for your advice to improve my English skill.
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You said that i have to get a book and read it aloud , i feel same with you.
>>You said that i have to get a book and read it aloud , also feel the same.
I bought a short story some months ago, It is \"Tolstoy\'s short stories\".
>>correct
There are two stories in that book, one is \"What men live by\" and another is \"Ivan the fool\".
>>correct
I am reading the book, but i have not finished reading the book. ha ha.
>>correct
I am so lazy, ain\'t I?
>>correct
See you Friday.
>>correct
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In my opinion, people don\'t automatically have leadership, They have to make a ceaseless effort to get a ability.
>>In my opinion, people don\'t automatically have leadership, They have to make a ceaseless effort to get the ability.
To do this, they must have a open mind, listen to other\'s opinion and learn how to be leadership.
>>To do this, they must have an open mind, listen to others opinion and learn how to be leader.
A unwise and not ready leader can break a organization.
>>An unwise and not ready a leader can break a organization.
In other world, a foolish president can break a country either in our or your country.
>>In other words, a foolish president can break a country either in our or your country.
Therefor people must vote well not to be elected such leader.
>>Therefore people should vote wisely to elect a good leader
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