Homework(6/27): filling gaps

2016-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear sam. I am glad to tell you about a Korean traditional story, Heungbu and Nolbu. and Thanks for your advice "Make mistakes, make more mistakes and continue to make mistakes. The only way you will learn is by making mistakes, feel free to make them and make them often." So far, I was actually afraid I make a mistake. But from now, i will be eager to make a mistake in speaking English. Thanks again. = body = 1. If you boil water, it will evaporate. 2. When I get up in the morning, I first brush my teeth. 3. Though he is quite famous, he is very modest. 4. When the police came they found that the burglar had escaped. 5. If you are not careful, you will slip and fall. 6. We can play tennis or go to jog 7. He was not admitted because he was underage. 8. When the teacher entered the classroom, you should get up. 9. Mohit loves to sketch.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh, I do hope that you can achieve all of your goals this year because I know you can learn from all of this experiences.  I am very happy to read your goals in life because this activities are beneficial for you. In addition, it can also help you improve you skills in English, as a result you\'ll be successful in life. Thank you very much!!! T. Jeny   Dear sam. >>correctI am glad to tell you about a Korean traditional story, Heungbu and Nolbu. >>correctand Thanks for your advice \"Make mistakes, make more mistakes and continue to make mistakes. >>And thanks for your advice, \"Make mistakes, make more mistakes and continue to make mistakes. The only way you will learn is by making mistakes, feel free to make them and make them often.\" >>correctSo far, I was actually afraid I make a mistake. >>So far, I was actually afraid to make a mistake.But from now, i will be eager to make a mistake in speaking English. >>correctThanks again.>>correct= body =1. If you boil water, it will evaporate.>>correct2. When I get up in the morning, I first brush my teeth.>>correct3. Though he is quite famous, he is very modest.>>correct4. When the police came they found that the burglar had escaped.>>correct5. If you are not careful, you will slip and fall.>>correct6. We can play tennis or go to jog>>b) jogging7. He was not admitted because he was underage.>>correct8. When the teacher entered the classroom, you should get up.>>b) enters9. Mohit loves to sketch. >>correct

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