Homework(6/29): Unsuccessful experience

2016-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear sam. i founded the reason why i can't hear your voice today morning. The reason was not to plug in my receiver deeply until "ttok" sound. haha. But i could not find the reason of speaker-phone function. I pressed mic-shaped button but it did not work well and i didn't hear well because noise with "ppeeeek" sound. i need time to be familiar with new machine. See you Friday, sam. = body = I thought my unsuccessful experience but i could little the experiences. i had no goals until my high school age, I only studied hard for intangible future. If i had a specific dream, the dream had been made. Therefore when someone ask me how to success, i always say that you have a goals in advance. After graduating university, I got a job and have been working until now. 20 years ago, i started new business and i had unsuccessful experience but i don't think it's failure, i think it's a good experience in my life.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

We have to push ourselves to do the best thing we can possibly do to be successful in life.
So, I encourage you to think positive that you can improve your skills in English.
Have fun and enjoy....you will be successful.
Have a great day!!!
T. Jeny
 

Dear sam.

>>correct
i founded the reason why i can\'t hear your voice today morning.

>>I found out the reason why I can\'t hear your voice this morning.
The reason was not to plug in my receiver deeply until \"ttok\" sound. haha.

>>The \"ttok\" wasn\'t plugged on. haha
But i could not find the reason of speaker-phone function.

>>But I can\'t find the speaker-phone button.
I pressed mic-shaped button but it did not work well and i didn\'t hear well because noise with \"ppeeeek\" sound.

>>I pressed the mic-shaped button but it did not work well and I can\'t hear your voice well because of the \"ppeeeek\" noise.

i need time to be familiar with new machine.
>>correct

See you on Friday, sam.
>>correct
= body =
I thought my unsuccessful experience but i could little the experiences.

>>I was thinking of my unsuccessful experience but I only have a few experiences.
i had no goals until my high school age, I only studied hard for intangible future.

>>I had no goals \'til I was in high school, I just studied hard for an intangible future.

If i had a specific dream, the dream had been made.

>>correct
Therefore when someone ask me how to success, i always say that you have a goals in advance.

>>Therefore if someone will ask me how to succeed, I will always say, \"You have to have goals in advance.\"
After graduating university, I got a job and have been working until now.

>>After graduating from university, I got a job and had been working until now.
20 years ago, i started new business and i had unsuccessful experience but i don\'t think it\'s failure, i think it\'s a good experience in my life.

>>20 years ago, I opened a new business and I had an unsuccessful experience but I didn\'t consider that as a failure. I think it was a good experience in my life.

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