Homework(6/3) : Corruption common in our country

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I have been saying that corruption is common in our country.

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If you see TV drama, movie and news in Korea, you are able to find a corruption scandal in all areas such as politics, economy, even in the field of culture and art which should not be polluted.

>>If you can see a TV drama, movie and news in Korea, you can discover corruption scandals in all areas such as politics, economy, and  culture and art.

I feel fear to see and hear daily news.

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The root cause is not to have justice, and it owes to politician and lawmaker.

>>The root cause is not to have justice, the politicians and lawmakers owe this situation.
Historically, after independence from Japan, we had a chance to realize justice as getting rid of pro-Japanese groups.

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But pro-Japanese LEE was elected as president by illegal vote, he made a person kill a patriot, KIM KOO.

>>But pro-Japanese LEE was elected as a president with illegal votes, he ordered to kill a patriot, KIM KOO.

To retain illegal power, he used pro-Japanese at all areas above From that time, Justice in our country was lost.

>>To retain illegal power, he used pro-Japanese in all areas above from that time. Justice in our country was lost.

and then Park, father of current president, take a power through a coup.

>>And then Park, the father of our current president, took power through coup.

 He was also pro-Japanese.

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The history has been continuing this time.

>>The history has been continuing until now.
I hope that someday they all will be gotten rid of.

>>I hope that someday they will all get rid of it.