Homework 6

2013-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: If someone you love was diagnose that he/she is terminally ill. Are you going to tell him/her that she is going to die already? Why? I will tell him that she is going to die. I don't know love well. But if he were person I love, I have to help him prepare for death. Before he die, I will do many things and build up good memories. Although I am hard, I will help him.

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Hi there^^, Thank you for doing your homework!! You did pretty good explaining your thoughts in this homework!! Yes, I agree with you and I will do the same!! Anyway, talk to you in class!!Have a great day and enjoy your weekend!! ~T.Chelsea HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:If someone you love was diagnose that he/she is terminally ill. Are you going to tell him/her that she is going to die already? Why?I will tell him that she is going to die. >>CORRECT!I don\'t know love well. >>I don\'t know love very well.But if he were person I love, I have to help him prepare for death.>>but if the person I love is going to die, I will help him prepare for his death. Before he die, I will do many things and build up good memories. >>CORRECT! Although I am hard, I will help him. >>Although it will be hard for me, I will still help him.

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