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ESSAY: Do you think climate affects the industry of a certain country? Yes, i think climate affects the industry of a certain country a lot. According to the climate, the way of life can be very different in each country. Then it would be also different in what they need in order to survive, so they will start industry for what they need in that climate. In addition, there are areas which are very advantageous to agriculture or disadvantageous to agriculture according to the climate. The country which has advantageous climate can push forward argriculture industry, and the country which has disadvantage climate for argriculture can propel other industries such as manufacturing business. Therefore climate can decide the industry of a certain country.

Hi [이름]!^ Job well done!^^ I am so impressed with your idea today!^^ Keep it flowing! Have a great day ahead!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Yes, i think climate affects the industry of a certain country a lot. >> Yes, I think climate affects the industry of a certain country a lot. According to the climate, the way of life can be very different in each country. >> CORRECT OR> The daily life od people would vary according to the climate in their country.Then it would be also different in what they need in order to survive, so they will start industry for what they need in that climate. >> Then it would be also different in what they need in order to survive, so they will start an industry for what they need in that climate. In addition, there are areas which are very advantageous to agriculture or disadvantageous to agriculture according to the climate. >> CORRECT OR> In some areas, agriculture can be an advantage or a disadvantage.The country which has advantageous climate can push forward argriculture industry, and the country which has disadvantage climate for argriculture can propel other industries such as manufacturing business. >> The country which has an advantageous climate can push forward with the argriculture industry, and the country which has a disadvantageous climate for argriculture can propel other industries such as manufacturing businesses. Therefore climate can decide the industry of a certain country. >> CORRECT OR> Climate can be a major factor in creating an industry of a certain country.