Homework #6
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Q. Talk about five specific goals you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them.
A.
As you know, there is only a few remaining months of this year.
A new year had begun, I set some goals to accomplish in this year,
but I afraid that I can’t accomplish some of them within this year.
However, I don’t give up and try to achieve these goals next year.
Anyway, I accomplished these things (of course No.4 has a long way to go!).
1. Watch the performance of my favorite artist.
2. Get a driver’s license.
3. Go on travel with my friend.
4. Loose weight (I think that all women set the loose weight at the beginning of the year. XD)
5. Get a job
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Hello Kate, thanks for sharing your answers to me.
Take care of yourself and drink your medicine. Have a good night. ^^
Q. Talk about five specific goals you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them.
A.
As you know, there is only a few remaining months of this year.
>> CORRECT
A new year had begun, I set some goals to accomplish in this year,
>> A new year had begun, I have set some goals to accomplish within this year,
but I afraid that I can't accomplish some of them within this year.
>> but I am afraid that I can't accomplish some of them within this year.
However, I don't give up and try to achieve these goals next year.
>> CORRECT
Anyway, I accomplished these things (of course No.4 has a long way to go!).
>> CORRECT
1. Watch the performance of my favorite artist.
>> CORRECT
2. Get a driver's license.
>> CORRECT
3. Go on travel with my friend.
>> Go on a travel with my friend.
4. Loose weight (I think that all women set the loose weight at the beginning of the year. XD)
>> CORRECT
5. Get a job
>> CORRECT
Take care of yourself and drink your medicine. Have a good night. ^^
Q. Talk about five specific goals you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them.
A.
As you know, there is only a few remaining months of this year.
>> CORRECT
A new year had begun, I set some goals to accomplish in this year,
>> A new year had begun, I have set some goals to accomplish within this year,
but I afraid that I can't accomplish some of them within this year.
>> but I am afraid that I can't accomplish some of them within this year.
However, I don't give up and try to achieve these goals next year.
>> CORRECT
Anyway, I accomplished these things (of course No.4 has a long way to go!).
>> CORRECT
1. Watch the performance of my favorite artist.
>> CORRECT
2. Get a driver's license.
>> CORRECT
3. Go on travel with my friend.
>> Go on a travel with my friend.
4. Loose weight (I think that all women set the loose weight at the beginning of the year. XD)
>> CORRECT
5. Get a job
>> CORRECT
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