Homework 6

2016-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Would you want to journey back in time and experience childhood again? Why/not? Give some examples. I want to go past. because it means a new experience. For example, we can meet various kind of people and know about them before i didn't. The other reason is that i can change my future through back to the past. There are so many regretful event. it can be exchange by choosing wise choice.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear SUN! Thank you so much for sending in your homework! I really appreciate your time and effort in doing your homework and I commend you for that. Keep up the good work okay because I do believe in you.^^ Take care always and have a good night... xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Would you want to journey back in time and experience childhood again? Why/not? Give some examples.I want to go past. because it means a new experience. >>I want to go back in time because it will only mean having new experiences.For example, we can meet various kind of people and know about them before i didn\'t.>>For example, we can meet different people and know more things about them.The other reason is that i can change my future through back to the past. >>The other reason is that I can change my future.There are so many regretful event. >>There are so many things that I tend to regret. it can be exchange by choosing wise choice. >>They can only be changed by choosing wisely.

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