Homework(6/7): compare high school generation between past and current

2016-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Sam. In advance, I will be able to take lesson tomorrow. I will directly cancel at this home page. I have to attend important meeting tomorrow. A foreigner will visit from US on business, the meeting was planed 9 o'clock. My team members and I have to attend the meetinG mandatory. See you Thursday. = body = Compare my high school generation with today's generation. 1. Dress and hair code - past : uniform and short hair - now: free style, depending on principal's decision 2. Mobile phone and PC - past : Nobody has a cellphone and personal computer - now : Almost everyone has a cellphone and many students have a PC 3. Internet - past : all is offline because there was no internet. i can only get all information from books or teacher's teaching. - now : Almost all pieces of information can get anytime, anywhere. 4. In common, past and present, Adults say that students these days are terrible and wrong. haha

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

I would like to inform you to please call the mangers about your request. I am sorry to hear that you can\'t take the class, but I will see you on Thursday. Take care Oh!!! \"You should contact our managers by calling them or leaving a message on our 24-hour customer service board and I\'m sure they would be more than happy to assist you. You can also postpone your class on our website\"

It was a privilege for me to talk to you today.I encourage you to assess yourself and set up your goals, these goals are ownership of your learnings. So start setting up your goals in learning English these are your treasures. I can see your potentials in speaking keep it up.!!!!

T. Jeny

Sam.

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In advance, I will be able to take lesson tomorrow.

>>In advance, I won\'t be able to take lesson tomorrow.
I will directly cancel at this home page.

>>correct
I have to attend important meeting tomorrow.

>>I have to attend an important meeting tomorrow.
A foreigner will visit from US on business, the meeting was planed 9 o\'clock.

>>A foreigner from US will visit our office for an important business and the meeting was planned at 9 o\'clock.
My team members and I have to attend the meetinG mandatory.

>>correct
See you Thursday.

>>See you on Thursday.

= body =


Compare my high school generation with today\'s generation.
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1. Dress and hair code

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- past : uniform and short hair

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- now: free style, depending on principal\'s decision

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2. Mobile phone and PC

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- past : Nobody has a cellphone and personal computer

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- now : Almost everyone has a cellphone and many students have a PC

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3. Internet

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- past : all is offline because there was no internet.

>>correct
i can only get all information from books or teacher\'s teaching.

>>I can only get all information from books or teacher\'s lessons.
- now : Almost all pieces of information can get anytime, anywhere.
>>now : Almost all pieces of information can get anytime and anywhere.
4. In common, past and present,

>>correct
Adults say that students these days are terrible and wrong. haha

>>correct

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