HOMEWORK 6
학생이 쓴 원문
Making me feeel smile is my best friend!
Because,when I have a chat with my best freind, I feel very happy.
My best freind is always kind to everyone. I think that she is a wisdom person!!
강사 첨삭
Hi my dearest [이름]!
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Thank you for making your assignment!
Good job for today!
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
Making me feeel smile is my best friend!
Because,when I have a chat with my best freind, I feel very happy.
My best freind is always kind to everyone. I think that she is a wisdom person!!
>> The person who makes me smile is my best friend. I feel very happy when I chat with her and she is always kind to everyone. I also think that she is a person with great wisdom.
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