homework_6

Thank you very much for your paragraph, Ga Eun^^

Good luck on getting that job!

Friends are very important because they also serve as our role models^^

What they do is also what we want :)

-My cover letter

>>CORRECT!
 I had sold Nike\'s shoes and clothes in Korean department store for 3 month.

>> I had sold Nike shoes and clothes in a Korean department store for 3 months.
 I have organized the product that will be sold and I took on the casher of position also.

>>I have organized the product that will be sold and I took on the cashier position also.

I can notify requriement that a quest wants and I can recommend that.

>>I have the ability of meeting guests\' requirements and I can recommend appropriate products.

I have really an outgoing, bright personality so I can welcome a quest.

>>I have an outgoing and bright personality, so I can welcome a guest positively.

I think a seller must be a good speaker and must speak English well but greeting quests is very important too.

>>I think a seller must be a good speaker and must speak English well but greeting guests is very important too.

I can\'t speak English well but I will try to develop the skills of speak English very hard than anyone.

>>I can\'t speak English well, but I will try to develop my English speaking skills harder than anyone.
If you pick me, you won\'t regret it.
>>I assure you that you won\'t regret hiring me.
 -Title: Do our friends influence the quality of our life?

>>CORRECT!
 If our friends study hard, we will study hard too.

>>CORRECT!

On the other hand, If our friends don’t anything and drink a lot and just like playing, we will do that.

>>On the other hand, if our friends don’t do anything and drink a lot and just like playing, we will do that.

So making friends is very important.

>>Therefore, making friends is very important.

I think that if I have a friend who has a lot of something that learn, I will be able to learn something good so good influence the quality of my life.

>>I think that if I have a friend who has a lot of something that I can learn, I will be able to learn something good so he or she can influence the quality of my life positively.