Homework(6/9): as, when,wile

2016-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear sam. After this course, i want to continue to learn English. But it is actually too difficult to take a lesson 5 times a week, It dues to busy on business. Therefore i want to take a lesson 3 timeS a week for 20 mins. I hope that you can teach me want you as my teacher continuously how was your opinion? I want to talk about this issue tomorrow. Take care during raining season there. See you tomorrow. = body = 1. The telephone rang as I am having a bath. 2. While you were reading the paper, I was working. 3. Dad cooked supper while mom watched TV. 4. When I was a child, we lived in Kerala. 5. His parents died when he was a child. 6. As I get older, I get more anxious. 7 While he was returning from the field, he was bitten by a snake. 8. As he was in Germany, he made friends with a musician.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

It nice for you to answer your homework. I do know that you have the potential in improving your skills in speaking English language.

Have a great day!!!!

T. Jeny

 

Dear sam.

>>correct
After this course, i want to continue to learn English.

>>After this course, I want to continue learning English.
But it is actually too difficult to take a lesson 5 times a week, It dues to busy on business.

>>But it is actually too difficult to take a 5-day class, due to my busy schedule.

Therefore i want to take a lesson 3 times a week for 20 mins.

>>correct

>>Therefore I want to study 3 times a week for 20 minutes.
I hope that you can teach me want you as my teacher continuously

>>I hope you can continuously teach me.

>>I hope you can continuously be my teacher.

how was your opinion?

>>What is your opinion?
I want to talk about this issue tomorrow.

>>correct
Take care during raining season there.

>>Take care during the rainy season there.
See you tomorrow.
>>correct
= body =
1. The telephone rang as I am having a bath.
>>correct
2. While you were reading the paper, I was working.
>>correct
3. Dad cooked supper while mom watched TV.
>>correct
4. When I was a child, we lived in Kerala.
>>correct
5. His parents died when he was a child.
>>correct
6. As I get older, I get more anxious.
>>correct
7 While he was returning from the field, he was bitten by a snake.
>>correct
8. As he was in Germany, he made friends with a musician.

>>When he was in Germany, he made friends with a musician.

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