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1.
I think it\'s possible to find the cure for CoVid-19.
But it takes long time.
Because it\'s still increasing infected in many countries.
Therefore, I think the country that finds the cure for CoVid-19 first will have a very good image.
2.
I think Korea was calmer than any other countries from CoVid-19.
Korean people already knew important of using a mask because of fine dust from China.
Therefore, I think as much as prevention is better than cure.
And I think Korean people have special soul.
Every time Korea has hard situation, Korean people have special power and strong power.
Definitely, we should appreciate the efforts of Korean medical staffs.
If it had not been for them, Korea will be not get better.
강사 첨삭
Thank you an!
>>CORRECT!
~Lucy
I think it\'s possible to find the cure for CoVid-19.
>>CORRECT!
But it takes long time.
But it takes long time.
>>But it takes a long time.
Because it\'s still increasing infected in many countries.
Because it\'s still increasing infected in many countries.
>>Because cases are still increasing in many countries.
Therefore, I think the country that finds the cure for CoVid-19 first will have a very good image.
>>CORRECT!
I think Korea was calmer than any other countries from CoVid-19.
I think Korea was calmer than any other countries from CoVid-19.
>>CORRECT!
Korean people already knew important of using a mask because of fine dust from China.
Korean people already knew important of using a mask because of fine dust from China.
>>Korean people already knew the importance of using a mask because of fine dust from China.
Therefore, I think as much as prevention is better than cure.And I think Korean people have special soul.
>>CORRECT!
Every time Korea has hard situation, Korean people have special power and strong power.
Every time Korea has hard situation, Korean people have special power and strong power.
>>CORRECT!
Definitely, we should appreciate the efforts of Korean medical staffs.
Definitely, we should appreciate the efforts of Korean medical staffs.
>>CORRECT!
If it had not been for them, Korea will be not get better.
If it had not been for them, Korea will be not get better.
>>If it had not been for them, Korea will not get better.
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