Homework-6 Oct 25
학생이 쓴 원문
I was born in Chuncheon-city, it takes 2 hours from here where I live.
the area is mountainous, so close to the ski resort and good to go to the beach in about an hour.
I like skying in winter and swimming and running in summer, but these days i have a backache so i can\'t do the exercises that i like.
I will try to start exercising to get my health back again.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
You did a great job sharing about your hometown and the activities you enjoy! I like how you described Chuncheon and connected it to your personal experiences. It’s nice that you’re thinking about getting back to exercise for your health. Take care of your back, and I hope you can enjoy skiing and running again soon!
~Teacher Polly
>>I was born in Chuncheon City, which is about two hours away from where I live now.
the area is mountainous, so close to the ski resort and good to go to the beach in about an hour.
>>The area is mountainous, so it’s close to ski resorts and also just about an hour from the beach.
I like skying in winter and swimming and running in summer, but these days i have a backache so i can\'t do the exercises that i like.
>>I like skiing in the winter and swimming and running in the summer, but these days I have a backache, so I can’t do the exercises I enjoy.
I will try to start exercising to get my health back again.
>>I’ll try to start exercising again to regain my health.
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