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2015-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I went a saipan in last year. I swam in the swimmingpool and sea. I was eat delicious food. It was excited and fun. i want to go there next year to.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! You are such a brilliant kid! Way to go! Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ I went a saipan in last year.>> I went to Saipan last year.  I swam in the swimmingpool and sea.>> I swam in the swimming pool and in the sea.  I was eat delicious food.>> I ate delicious foods.  It was excited and fun.>> It was fun and exciting.  i want to go there next year to. >> I want to go there again next year.   

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