Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
The sky is high today.
After the typhoon, the weather is really good.
It's a good day to go out and do things.
See you on Monday.
Should students be allowed to have cell phones in elementary and high schools? Why or why not?
Aa far as I know, most students can have their cell phone in school.
However, it is common that schools have a way to control their cell phone.
One of the regulations is that they are not allowed to use their cell phone during school hours.
This is very important point since using cell phone can interrupt class.
Therefore, students in the lower grades set their cell phone apart during school hours, and students in the higher grades are given a demerit mark for their using cell phone during class.
There might not be any special reason, considering schools are the place for studying.
However, in the respect of human rights and freedom, it's not desirable to ban on the use of cell phones in school.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Good job!
Keep up the good work!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! The sky is high today.
>> The sky is clear today.
After the typhoon, the weather is really good.
>> CORRECT! It\'s a good day to go out and do things.
>> CORRECT! See you on Monday.
>> CORRECT! As far as I know, most students can have their cell phone in school.
>> CORRECT! However, it is common that schools have a way to control their cell phone use.
>> CORRECT! One of the regulations is that they are not allowed to use their cell phone during school hours.
>> CORRECT! This is very important point since using cell phone can interrupt class.
>> This is very important since using a cell phone can interrupt the class.
Therefore, students in the lower grades set their cell phone apart during school hours, and students in the higher grades are given a demerit mark for their using cell phone during class.
>> Therefore, students in the lower grades put their cell phone away during school hours, and students in the higher grades are given a demerit mark for using their cell phone during class.
There might not be any special reason, considering schools are the place for studying.
>> There might not be any special reason, considering a school is a place for studying.
However, in the respect of human rights and freedom, it\'s not desirable to ban the use of cell phones in school.
>> CORRECT!
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