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학생이 쓴 원문
I disagree prerequisite learning.
I don't give the stress to children before going to school.
I hope children to have much more play time before to be student.
If they learn earlier, when they go to school, they might not to feel interest about study.
I worry about they lost interest in study.
I make my baby to learn naturally during his school days.
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I disagree prerequisite learning.
>>I disagree with prerequisite learning.I don\'t give the stress to children before going to school.
>>I won\'t cause any stress to children before going to school.I hope children to have much more play time before to be student.
>>I hope to give enough time for children to play before they will go to school.If they learn earlier, when they go to school, they might not to feel interest about study.
>>If they will go to school early, they might lose their interests in studying.I worry about they lost interest in study.
>>I would worry about it.I make my baby to learn naturally during his school days.
>>I will just make my son learn in a natural way.
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