homework
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Travel is sort of learning about new place's culture.
People persue to have meaning during journey.
Learning other country's culture can make good memory.
There are no one only for having resting time to go far away from their home, and willing to stand inconvenience life during their travel
Human always search for their the reason of their life.
It is one of ways to visit museums on travel.
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Travel is sort of learning about new place\'s culture.>>Traveling is a sort of learning about a new place\'s culture.People persue to have meaning during journey.>>People pursue to have a meaningful journey.Learning other country\'s culture can make good memory.>>Learning other country\'s culture can make good memories.There are no one only for having resting time to go far away from their home, and willing to stand inconvenience life during their travelHuman always search for their the reason of their life. >>It is a form of relaxation away from the inconveniences of life and at home because humans search for their existence.It is one of ways to visit museums on travel.>>Visiting a museum during their trip is one of the best ways.
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