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Whew, eggs!
Easy on them, Adam! Too much can elevate your blood pressure ha! ha!
Thank you for this and see you~
It is very difficult topic because I am a big eater.
>>It is a very difficult topic because I am a big eater.
But if I musy choose just one food, I\'d like to choose eggs.
>> But if I must choose just one food, I\'d like to choose eggs.
Because there are lots of recipe that use eggs.
>>Because there are lots of recipes that use eggs.
We can boil the egg, fry the egg and make an omelet.
>>We can boil it, fry it and make an omelet.
Also it has abundant nutriments especially protein.
>>Also it has abundant nutrients especially protein.
We call the egg to completed foods.
>>We call the egg \"complete food\".
So I want to choose eggs.
>>So I choose eggs.
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