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2015-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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It is very difficult topic because I am a big eater. But if I musy choose just one food, I'd like to choose eggs. Because there are lots of recipe that use eggs. We can boil the egg, fry the egg and make an omelet. Also it has abundant nutriments especially protein. We call the egg to completed foods. So I want to choose eggs.

강사 첨삭

Whew, eggs!

Easy on them, Adam! Too much can elevate your blood pressure ha! ha!

Thank you for this and see you~

It is very difficult topic because I am a big eater.

>>It is a very difficult topic because I am a big eater.
 But if I musy choose just one food, I\'d like to choose eggs.

>> But if I must choose just one food, I\'d like to choose eggs.
Because there are lots of recipe that use eggs.

>>Because there are lots of recipes that use eggs.
We can boil the egg, fry the egg and make an omelet.

>>We can boil it, fry it and make an omelet.

Also it has abundant nutriments especially protein.

>>Also it has abundant nutrients especially protein.
We call the egg to completed foods.

>>We call the egg \"complete food\".

 So I want to choose eggs.

>>So I choose eggs.

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