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2015-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Today is the last day of August. I'm always feeling that the time flies. Anyway, below is my homework for today. Would your life be better or worse, if you knew the time and place where you would die? There would be pros and cons, if I know the time and place where I would die. In my opinion, it would be better to know the time and place where I would die. I think death is alike to travel to a faraway land. To go on a trip somewhere for a long time, I have to prepare various things for my family. I should particularly make my son do most things by himself. It is something to be thankful that I can have some time to prepare for it before I die. This would make both my family and I feel natural and comfortable.

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Hello Kaylee! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic. I honestly don\'t know if I can take that information and use it in a good way. I like your answer here. I couldn\'t have answered it better. Keep up the good work! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Today is the last day of August. >> CORRECT! I\'m always feeling that the time flies. >> I always feel like time flies.Anyway, below is my homework for today. >> CORRECT! There would be pros and cons, if I know the time and place where I would die. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, it would be better to know the time and place where I would die. >> CORRECT! I think death is alike to travel to a faraway land.>> I think death is like traveling to a far away land. To go on a trip somewhere for a long time, I have to prepare various things for my family. >> Before I could go on a trip, I have to prepare various things for my family.I should particularly make my son do most things by himself. >> In particular, I should help my son do things by himself.It is something to be thankful that I can have some time to prepare for it before I die. >> I should be thankful that I can have some time to prepare for it before I die.This would make both my family and I feel natural and comfortable. >> This would be more comfortable and much easier for both my family and me.  

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