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2015-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello~^^ Did you have fun on the weekend? Thanks for considering about my nephew.*^^* You asked me about the moment that I was hospitalized.. I wasn't hospitalized but I couldn't forget when I went to a doctor in the Philippines. One day, I was on the way to have a class I felt something weird. I felt like vomitting and having a headache. My symptoms were like pregnancy. I told my tutors about this but they didn't take this seriously. During the class, My closed tutor noticed that I was serious so I went to a doctor. After I got an IV and took some medicine, I was better. The doctor did not explain about my disease..so I dont know the reason until now.. However, I am healthy now..I and my tutor sometimes talk about that moment. 1. I’m not scared of you! 2. I’m not really interested in this kind of music. 3. He’s really good at algebra. 4. Are you excited about your trip to Tokyo? 5. His new book is very different from his last book.

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Hi Miss [이름]! I had a great time this weekend. I tried to avoid all my responsibilities and I just slept and read a book. ^^ I guess it was successful. Hahaha! ^^ Thanks for writing about your experience and I\'m glad you\'re all better now. ^^ What happened to you was indeed mysterious. But the important thing is that you are OK now. ^^ I hope you\'ll have a stress-free week! Teacher Anne   Hello~^^ Did you have fun on the weekend? >> Correct!Thanks for considering about my nephew.*^^* >> Thanks for being concerned about my nephew.You asked me about the moment that I was hospitalized.. >> Correct!I wasn\'t hospitalized but I couldn\'t forget when I went to a doctor in the Philippines. >> There was when I to a doctor in the Philippines. Although I wasn\'t hospitalized, it was truly unforgettable for me. One day, I was on the way to have a class I felt something weird.  >> One day, I was on my way to have my class when I felt something weird.I felt like vomitting and having a headache. My symptoms were like pregnancy.>> I felt like vomitting and having a headache. The symptoms I felt were like that of a pregnant woman. I told my tutors about this but they didn\'t take this seriously. >> Correct!During the class, My closed tutor noticed that I was serious so I went to a doctor.>> During the class, a tutor close to me noticed that I was  in serious pain, so I went to a doctor. After I got an IV and took some medicine, I was better. >> After I was given an IV, and some medicine, I felt better.The doctor did not explain about my disease..so I dont know the reason until now.. >> The doctor didn\'t tell me about his diagnosis, so I still don\'t know the reason until now.However, I am healthy now..I and my tutor sometimes talk about that moment. >> However, I am healthy now, and my tutor sometimes talks to me about the incident.1. I’m not scared of you! >> Correct!2. I’m not really interested in this kind of music. >> Correct!3. He’s really good at algebra. >> Correct!4. Are you excited about your trip to Tokyo? >> Correct!5. His new book is very different from his last book. >> Correct!

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