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2015-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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hello! I'm sorry that I didn't write last week. so I put writtings. have a nice day! 8.27 writting I look forward to speak English well. I would like to look as people see me speaking well. If I speak well, I will talk foreigner and go to trip of various countries.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I appreciate your effort in answering your homework despite handing it in late. As they say, \"better late than never\". Take care and have a great afternoon!T. JanE ^^ Hello!>> Correct I\'m sorry that I didn\'t write last week.>> Correct so I put writtings.>> So here are my writings. Have a nice day!>> Correct8.27 writtingI look forward to speak English well.>> I look forward to speaking English well. I would like to look as people see me speaking well.>> I would like to look at people as they look at me while I\'m speaking well. If I speak well, I will talk foreigner and go to trip of various countries. >> If I speak well, I will talk with foreigners and go on a trip to various countries.

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