homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hello!
I'm sorry that I didn't write last week.
so I put writtings.
have a nice day!
8.27 writting
I look forward to speak English well.
I would like to look as people see me speaking well.
If I speak well, I will talk foreigner and go to trip of various countries.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I appreciate your effort in answering your homework despite handing it in late. As they say, \"better late than never\". Take care and have a great afternoon!T. JanE ^^
Hello!>> Correct
I\'m sorry that I didn\'t write last week.>> Correct
so I put writtings.>> So here are my writings.
Have a nice day!>> Correct8.27 writtingI look forward to speak English well.>> I look forward to speaking English well.
I would like to look as people see me speaking well.>> I would like to look at people as they look at me while I\'m speaking well.
If I speak well, I will talk foreigner and go to trip of various countries.
>> If I speak well, I will talk with foreigners and go on a trip to various countries.
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