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2015-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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8.28 writting I am always grateful for that my parent support me. When I was young, I thought that supporting of parent took for granted. But I realized that some parent didn't support to children. Now I have an effort that I solve according myself.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! We must be really grateful to our parents and we must show them that we are. I hope your parents know how you feel for them. Take care and enjoy the rest of the day! T. JanE ^^ 8.28 writtingI am always grateful for that my parent support me.>> I am always grateful to my parents for supporting me.  When I was young, I thought that supporting of parent took for granted.>> When I was young, I thought that the support we get from our parents are taken for granted.  But I realized that some parent didn\'t support to children.>> But I realized that some parents don\'t support their children.  Now I have an effort that I solve according myself. >> Now I make an effort to solve things by myself.   

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