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The older I get, the more I change.
Whenever I grow old, I have experience than ever.
so I change thought, action and eating so on.
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Thank you for teaching and see you tomorrow!>> CorrectThe older I get, the more I change.>> Correct
Whenever I grow old, I have experience than ever.>> As I get older, I gain more experiences.
so I change thought, action and eating so on.
>> So I\'ve changed my thoughts, actions, food preferences, and so on.
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