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2015-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Dear T.Donna Hello, Last Friday, I had a dinner with my co-workers.>_< Sorry for canceling the class. Please refer to the below answers to the homework. 1. Danny wanted 'a' new bicycle for Christmas. 2. Jennifer tasted 'the' birthday cake her mother had made. 3. The children have 'a' new teacher called Mr.Green 4. All pupils must obey 'the' rules 5. Dad turned on 'a' radio to listen to 'the' news. See you in my today's class! Sincerely yours, Jenny

강사 첨삭

Hi there Jenny! Now I understand. I hope that you had a meaningful time together with your colleagues. You got almost a perfect score for this activity, well done!
-T. Donna

Dear T.Donna

Hello,
Last Friday, I had a dinner with my co-workers.>_<
Sorry for canceling the class.
>> Correct! Or: Dear T. Donna,
Please refer to the below answers to the homework.
>> Please refer below for the homework.

1. Danny wanted \'a\' new bicycle for Christmas.
>> Correct!

2. Jennifer tasted \'the\' birthday cake her mother had made.
>> Correct!

3. The children have \'a\' new teacher called Mr.Green.
>> Correct!

4. All pupils must obey \'the\' rules
>> Correct!

5. Dad turned on \'a\' radio to listen to \'the\' news.
>> Dad turned on the radio to listen to \'the\' news.

See you in my today\'s class!
>> Correct!

Sincerely yours,
Jenny

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