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If I marry with foreigner, I guess that I can have more spare time. Having spare time is my goal in my life. It is sure that having more spare time is natural thing to foreigner. They love exercising,
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Adam! Do you believe that love conquers all ;)
Thanks for this ha! ha!
As long as trust and respect are present in the relationship, there will be no problem.
If I marry with foreigner, I guess that I can have more spare time.
>>If I marry a foreigner, I guess that I can have more spare time.
Having spare time is my goal in my life.
>>CORRECT!
It is sure that having more spare time is natural thing to foreigner.
>> It is sure that having more spare time is a natural thing to foreigner.
They love exercising,
>>I can say that because they love exercising.
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