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2015-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello!^^ It is a lovely day today. The weather here is getting cooler..^^ It makes me feel good! I have a favorite color but It is changeable. When I was youger, I liked bule.. It looked cool..but later I was into red..For now, I am interested in pink... Whenever I choose the things, my hands grab the pink things..hehe It is so..cute especially, baby pink which has more a white color...^^ I don't like to paint or draw something either. Maybe it is because of my work. I had to make some crafes and draw all the time when I worked as a kindergarten teacher...I am sick and tired of doing that!!^^; 1. He asked me the very hard question. 2. The question that he asked me was easy. 3. Have you seen my scarf? 4. Could you please pass me the salt? 5. Is there a good restaurant around here?

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]! I\'m glad the weather is lovely in your country. ^^ It certainly lightens the mood. ^^ I know how it feels to be doing arts and crafts as a teacher. We did it back in college and I did not like it all that much because I\'m terrible at cutting papers and other props. ^^ You did well in today\'s homework. It was perfect! ^^ I\'m looking forward to our conversation today! ^^ Teacher Anne   Hello!^^ It is a lovely day today. >> Correct!The weather here is getting cooler..^^ >> Correct!It makes me feel good! >> Correct!I have a favorite color but It is changeable. When I was youger, I liked bule.. >> I have a favorite color but it changes from time to time. When I was younger, I liked blue.It looked cool..but later I was into red..For now, I am interested in pink... > > Correct!Whenever I choose the things, my hands grab the pink things..hehe >> Whenever I choose things, my hands grab the pink ones..heheIt is so..cute especially, baby pink which has more a white color...^^ >> It is so cute, especially baby pink, which has a lighter color.I don\'t like to paint or draw something either. Maybe it is because of my work. >> Correct!I had to make some crafes and draw all the time when I worked as a kindergarten teacher... >> I had to make some crafts and draw all the time when I work as a kindergarten teacher... I am sick and tired of doing that!!^^; >> Correct!1. He asked me the very hard question. >> Correct!2. The question that he asked me was easy. >> Correct!3. Have you seen my scarf? >> Correct!4. Could you please pass me the salt? >> Correct!5. Is there a good restaurant around here? >> Correct!

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