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2015-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~ I am also happy to talk to u. Thanks to you, I can be talkative in our class. I think that you are also a friendly person. I am kinda picky. I am active and funny when I am with people who I like or I am comfortable with... I don't talk to strangers. So, it is hard to make friends for me and also I don't like to approach strangers. However, if I made a friend, that friendship is sincere ans lasts for good. I don't let my friend go first...^^; Because of this personality, it was hard to adjust to living alone in Australia. But there are always good people around the world. I had made some foreign friends from Japan, Taiwan, the Philippines and Australia. I keep in touch with them using Kakao talk.. By the way, I have 2 questions about my letters. Sorry for the late checking.^^; I will ask in our class tomorow 1. He’s never on time. He's always late. 2. Will you be at home later? 3. Which street did you park your car at? 4. I’ll see you on Friday. 5. I’ll see you in May.

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Hi Miss [이름]! You are a very loyal friend. It\'s a bit difficult to find real friends nowadays, isn\'t it? I\'m glad you are surrounded with a lot of friends. You even have friends internationally! That\'s awesome! Thank God for the internet. ^^ I\'d be glad to entertain your questions in class. ^^ See you! Teacher Anne   Hi~ I am also happy to talk to u. >> Hi~ I am also happy to talk to you.Thanks to you, I can be talkative in our class. >> Correct!I think that you are also a friendly person. >> Correct! I am kinda picky. I am active and funny when I am with people who I like orI am comfortable with... >> Correct!I don\'t talk to strangers. So, it is hard to make friends for me >> I don\'t talk to strangers. So, it is hard tfor me to make friends and also I don\'t like to approach strangers. >> Correct! However, if I made a friend, that friendship is sincere ans lasts for good. >>  However, if I made a friend, that friendship is sincere ansd it lasts for good. I don\'t let my friend go first...^^; >> I am not the first one to let go of my friends.Because of this personality, it was hard to adjust to living alone in Australia. >> Because of this personality, it was hard for me to adjust while living alone in Australia.But there are always good people around the world. >> Correct! I had made some foreign friends from Japan, Taiwan, the Philippines and Australia. >> Correct! I keep in touch with them using Kakao talk.. >> Correct!By the way, I have 2 questions about my letters. >> Correct! Sorry for the late checking.^^; >> Sorry for sending it late.I will ask in our class tomorow >> I will ask about it in our class tomorrow.1. He’s never on time. He\'s always late. >> Correct!2. Will you be at home later? >> Correct!3. Which street did you park your car at? >> Which street did you park your car on?4. I’ll see you on Friday. >> Correct!5. I’ll see you in May. >> Correct!

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