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2015-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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It is the best thing to have low expactation or to set goal we are sure of achiving because if we can't achive our goal that we have high expectation, our disappointment become more bigger. So we just prepare to achieve our goal. We can improve our ability than we can satisfy our dream

강사 첨삭

Adam! Thanks for this.

No matter what happens, you have to remember you did your best!

It is the best thing to have low expactation or to set goal we are sure of achiving because if we can\'t achive our goal that we have high expectation,

our disappointment become more bigger.

>>It is the best thing to have low expectation or to set goal we are sure of achieving, because if we can\'t achieve a goal we highly expected,

our disappointment becomes more bigger.

So we just prepare to achieve our goal.

>>Therefore we just have to prepare to achieve our goal.

We can improve our ability than we can satisfy our dream.

>>We can improve our ability then we can satisfy our dream.

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