Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
It feels like rain in my city, Seoul.
I guess it will be cool after this rain.
Have a good day!
Is it important to keep up with the latest fashion trend and style? Why or why not?
I think it depends on their job.
In my case, as a student studying politics, I can't feel the necessity to keep up with the latest fashion trend and style.
However, if I were a student majoring in fashion design or related field, keeping up with the latest fashion trend and style would be very important.
It is true that there are many people who like to keep up with the latest fashion trend, although they don't have related job.
Otherwise, it is also true that it's hart to keep up with the latest fashion if you're not working at related to fashion field.
I think pursuing the latest fashion is not the only valuable thing all of us have to consider.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for submitting your homework. You\'ve made a good point here. I think it\'s not just about studying fashion or working in the fashion industry, though. It\'s more like looking presentable, confident and decent at any given day. I try to keep up with the latest fashion trends just for the sake of it. I don\'t really follow it.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.>> CORRECT!
It feels like rain in my city, Seoul.
>> It feels like it\'s going to rain here in Seoul.I guess it will be cool after this rain.
>> CORRECT! Have a good day!
>> CORRECT! I think it depends on their job.
>> CORRECT! In my case, as a student studying politics, I can\'t feel the necessity to keep up with the latest fashion trend and style.
>> In my case, I don\'t feel the necessity to keep up with the latest fashion trends and style.
OR >> As a Politics student, I don\'t think it\'s necessary to keep up with the latest fashion trends and style.
However, if I were a student majoring in fashion design or any related field, keeping up with the latest fashion trend and style would be very important.
>> CORRECT! It is true that there are many people who like to keep up with the latest fashion trend, although they don\'t have related job.
>> CORRECT!
>> they don\'t have a job related to it
>> OR: it\'s not related to their jobOtherwise, it is also true that it\'s hart to keep up with the latest fashion if you\'re not working at related to fashion field.
>> On the other hand, it is also true that it\'s hard to keep up with the latest fashion trend if you\'re not working in a related field.
I think pursuing the latest fashion is not the only valuable thing all of us have to consider.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think following the latest fashion trend is not the only valuable thing that we have to consider. - better
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