Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I need a good perfomance computer on internet.
and I need my wife.
and I need a coffee machine.
Even if I don't have a dog.
I will have a dog later.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Jun!
Thank you so much for doing your essay.
I want to have a coffee machine, too! Hihihihi.
What is your favorite coffee drink?
I like Frappuccino. ^.^
I really appreciate that you always allot some time to do your homework.
You made me really happy today.
Teacher Nina
I need a good perfomance computer on internet.
>> Did you mean: I need to be good at computer and surfing the web.
and I need my wife.
>> correct
and I need a coffee machine.
>> Better: And I need a coffee machine, too.
Even if I don\'t have a dog. I will have a dog later.
>> Better: Even if I don\'t have a dog, I will have one soon.
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