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2015-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello~ It is another happy day!^^I am also looking forward my day off in this week as well.I don't know why mybody is so heavy.I just want to get some rest without doin anything..hehe It is natural..right? Teachers should feel good so that they can do their best to the students. So, teacher Anne~ take lots of rest in this weekend.^^ As you said, I am very happy with my job for now. Compare to the past job, I can't make money more but I feel free and I have my own time. When I worked in kindergaren, I worked for more than 12hours in a day. it is sad. 1)Right now,I am buying groceries. I need eggs, milk, and bread. 2)We are eating dinner. It tastes good. Can you pass me the salt,please? 3)He is drinking milk. It looks good. It is running down his chin. He needs a napkin. 4)Billyis doing his homework now. We are going to watch a movie when he is finished. 5)All of the children are dancing at the party.

강사 첨삭

A beautiful Thursday to you, Miss [이름]! Remember to get a good rest today and don\'t overwork yourself. ^^ As for me, I will really overs[이름]p this weekend and run away from all my duties. ^^ You are right, teachers like us should take care of our health. ^^ That\'s why I am always s[이름]ping when I\'m at home.  Everytime I leave my bed, I feel like I\'m in a sad love story. I love my bed so much. I can\'t leave it alone. Hahaha! Have a stress-free day, ^^ Teacher Anne   Hello~ It is another happy day!^^ >> Correct! I am also looking forward my day off in this week as well. >> Correct! I don\'t know why mybody is so heavy. I just want to get some rest without doin anything..hehe It is natural..right? >> I don\'t know why my body feels so heavy. I just want to get some rest without doing anything..hehe It is natural..right?Teachers should feel good so that they can do their best to the students. >> Teachers should feel good so that they can do their best in teaching their students.So, teacher Anne~ take lots of rest in this weekend.^^ >> Correct!As you said, I am very happy with my job for now. >> Correct!Compare to the past job, I can\'t make money more but I feel free and I have my own time. >> Compared to the past job, I can\'t make more money  but I feel free and I have my own time. When I worked in kindergaren, I worked for more than 12hours in a day. >> When I worked in kindergarten, I worked for more than 12 hours in a day.it is sad. >> It is sad. 1)Right now,I am buying groceries. I need eggs, milk, and bread. >> Correct!2)We are eating dinner. It tastes good. Can you pass me the salt,please? >> Correct!3)He is drinking milk. It looks good. It is running down his chin. He needs a napkin. >> Correct!4)Billy is doing his homework now. We are going to watch a moviewhen he is finished. >> Correct!5)All of the children are dancing at the party. >> Correct!

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