homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello!
I couldn't write it yesterday. So I am writting today.
Take care and have a nice day.
I wish that everyone I love has attention about me.
I'm careless personality.
so I need to give me attention. Then I will be happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! I hope you get all the attention you need. I also hope that you pay attention to others as well. Take care and have a great day!
T. JanE ^^
Hello!>> Correct
I couldn\'t write it yesterday.
>> Correct
So I am writting today.>> So I\'m writing today.
Take care and have a nice day.>> Correct I wish that everyone I love has attention about me.>> I wish that everyone I love would give their attention to me.
I\'m careless personality.>> I\'m a careless person.
so I need to give me attention. >> So I need more attention.
Then I will be happy.
>> Correct
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