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2015-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello! I couldn't write it yesterday. So I am writting today. Take care and have a nice day. I wish that everyone I love has attention about me. I'm careless personality. so I need to give me attention. Then I will be happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I hope you get all the attention you need. I also hope that you pay attention to others as well. Take care and have a great day! T. JanE ^^ Hello!>> Correct I couldn\'t write it yesterday. >> Correct So I am writting today.>> So I\'m writing today.  Take care and have a nice day.>> Correct I wish that everyone I love has attention about me.>> I wish that everyone I love would give their attention to me.  I\'m careless personality.>> I\'m a careless person.  so I need to give me attention. >> So I need more attention.  Then I will be happy. >> Correct

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