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2015-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I spilled the beverage in the subway a while ago. Then, I was embarrassed and I took down subway. whenever I thought that, I regreted why I did the action then. So after the accident happened, I have never taken beverages.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! That was such a bad experience. I hope you won\'t have another embarrassing one. Take care and enoy your free time! T. JanE ^^ I spilled the beverage in the subway a while ago.>> I spilled my beverage in the subway a while ago.  Then, I was embarrassed and I took down subway.>> I was embarrassed, so I got off the subway.  whenever I thought that, I regreted why I did the action then.>> Whenever I think about it, I regret why I did such thing.  So after the accident happened, I have never taken beverages. >> So after that incident, I promised not to take any beverage in the subway anymore.   

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