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2015-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Noise pollution is caused from car, train, construction area. Because of noise pollution, many students or workers can't focus on their study or work. To prevent noise pollution, people install a soundproofed wall. Actually, I think this is not dangerous. But it is the one of the social problem these days. So we should prepare some effective appliance to preveny nois pollution.

강사 첨삭

It is really disturbing Adam!

Especially when we want to take a rest, I want to kill the suspect, ha! ha!

OMG I am getting violent again ;)

Anyways, thanks for this, see you!

Noise pollution is caused from car, train, construction area.

>>Noise pollution is either caused by car, train or construction area.
Because of noise pollution, many students or workers can\'t focus on their study or work.

>>CORRECT!

To prevent noise pollution, people install a soundproofed wall.

>> To prevent noise pollution, people install a sound-proofed wall.

Actually, I think this is not dangerous.

>>CORRECT!
But it is the one of the social problem these days.

>>But it is the one of the social problems these days.

So we should prepare some effective appliance to preveny nois pollution.

>>So we should prepare some effective appliance to prevent noise pollution.

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