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2015-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, teacher! This is [이름]. I could guess you might be a very active girl and a social butterfly through your voice!:)) I'm envy you! Because I tend to become an introvert to new people and I can say clearly that I'm not a outgoing person. So when I talk with you through the phone I feel gaining energy from you! haha. Anyway this is my answers and see you soon! 1. Jeremy is older than Jenny. 2. They are the highest mountains in Europe. 3. An ocean is larger meaning than a sea. 4. A Rolls Royce is more expensive than a Twingo. 5. Fred's results were worse than John's. 6. It's easier than I expected. 7. I hope the weather will be better next week. 8. They are usually friendly in small towns. 9. In the government of a country, the president is the best important person. 10. People say that Chinese is more difficult to learn than English.

강사 첨삭

    A heartfelt Evening to you, [이름]! I am so happy that you answered your homework. It is even better that you expressed your thoughts about me and I appreciate it so much! Your perseverance to learn the English language is very evident! Please continue performing your best in class. There might be mistakes in your sentences or pronunciation but it is all part of learning so never give up. Do well and the fruits of your labor will soon be seen.   Teacher Carmen^^   Hi, teacher! >> Correct!   This is [이름]. >> Correct!   I could guess you might be a very active girl and a social butterfly through your voice!:)) >> I am guessing that you might be a very active girl and you are like a social butterfly with the sound of your voice! :))   I\'m envy you! >> Correct!   Because I tend to become an introvert to new people and I can say clearly that I\'m not a outgoing person. >> Because I am an introvert around new people that I meet and I can clearly say that I\'m not an outgoing person.   So when I talk with you through the phone I feel gaining energy from you! haha. >> I feel like I\'m gaining energy from you whenever I talk with you through the phone! haha!   Anyway this is my answers and see you soon! >> Anyway, these are my answers and see you soon!1. Jeremy is older than Jenny. >> Correct!2. They are the highest mountains in Europe. >> Correct!3. An ocean is larger meaning than a sea. >> larger than4. A Rolls Royce is more expensive than a Twingo. >> Correct!5. Fred\'s results were worse than John\'s. >> Correct!6. It\'s easier than I expected. >> Correct!7. I hope the weather will be better next week. >> Correct!8. They are usually friendly in small towns. >> friendlier9. In the government of a country, the president is the best important person.>> the most important 10. People say that Chinese is more difficult to learn than English. >> Correct!

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