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2015-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi Jeny^^ Do you have spending a gerat weekend? I am working now and I am at the hospital. But not so bad. Today is sunday. It is very peaceful. So I can do a homework. ------------------------- I don't have enough information about a car like a man But I always want to have my own car. I sometimes drive a car. The car is my husband's I like wine a color car and slip fit car. Driving a sports car is likely to be burden to me. I just imagine a picture of me on driving with a pretty car. See you tomorrow~~ Bye^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

I appreciate your time answering your homework everyday, it means that you are really interested with enhancing your skills in English. Just continue that attitude and you\'ll be successful in the future.

T. Jeny

 

Hi Jeny^^

>>correct
Do you have spending a gerat weekend?

>>Did you have a great weekend?
I am working now and I am at the hospital. But not so bad.

>>I am working at the hospital not but it is okay.
Today is sunday. It is very peaceful. So I can do a homework.

>>Today is Sunday so I have time to do my homework peacfully.
-------------------------
I don\'t have enough information about a car like a man\\

>>I don\'t have enough information about cars like men.
But I always want to have my own car.

>>But I always wanted to have my own car.
I sometimes drive a car. The car is my husba
nd\'s

>>I sometimes drive my husband\'s car.
I like wine a color car and slip fit car.

>>I like a wine color and a slim fit car.
Driving a sports car is likely to be burden to me.

>>Driving a sports car can be a burden for me.
I just imagine a picture of me on driving with a pretty car.
>>I just imagine a picture of me driving a pretty car.
See you tomorrow~~ Bye^^

>>correct

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