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2015-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I'm very good today because the weather is really nice. See you tomorrow. A job that requires a lot of thinking is more difficult than a job that requires no thinking. Do you agree? Why or why not? Give an example situation. All jobs are difficult in some aspects, but I agree with the above opinion. I had experienced both two kinds of job a long time ago. After graduating from university, I started working as a office worker. In the early part of my career, I worked at a factory producing some electronic devices, as a way of job training. Then, I thought manufacturing job has a good advantage because employees need to work by the time appointed. Of course, manufacturing job is more physically demanding than office job. However, thinking about tasks without stopping is really hard thing. Actually, I thought I didn't have a set time to finish my work. In conclusion, I think a job that requires a lot of thinking is relatively difficult because of stress.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for dropping by to do your homework. I appreciate it. Good job here. Please review my corrections below. Keep it up! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I\'m very good today because the weather is really nice. >> CORRECT! See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT! All jobs are difficult in some aspects, but I agree with the above opinion. >> CORRECT! I had experienced both two kinds of job a long time ago.>> I had experienced both kinds of job a long time ago. After graduating from university, I started working as a office worker. >> CORRECT! >> anIn the early part of my career, I worked at a factory producing some electronic devices, as a way of job training. >> CORRECT! >> as some kind of trainingThen, I thought manufacturing job has a good advantage because employees need to work by the time appointed. >> CORRECT! Of course, manufacturing job is more physically demanding than office job. >> CORRECT! However, thinking about tasks without stopping is really hard thing. >> However, thinking about the tasks that needed to be done was really hard.Actually, I thought I didn\'t have a set time to finish my work. >> Actually, I thought I didn\'t have a deadline to finish my work.In conclusion, I think a job that requires a lot of thinking is relatively difficult because of stress. >> CORRECT!  

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