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The best way is to shop moderately, Adam!
Shopping can take a toll on us when we lose control.
How about buying a thing every month, instead of doing it big time once? ;)
When I do eye shopping, I feel happy.
>>When I do window shopping, I feel happy.
A few months ago, I could afford to buy lots of cloths. So I bought many cloths.
>> A few months ago, I could to buy lots of clothes, so I bought a lot.
At that time, shopping gave me big pleasure.
>>CORRECT!
But these days, I have a tight budget so I haven\'t done shopping.
>>CORRECT!
I lost my hobby. But it is interesting to do eye shopping.
>>I lost my hobby, but it is interesting to do it.
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