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2015-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, teacher. I have a class today. It's about multiculturalism. I hope the class won't be boring. ^^ Do you agree or disagree: The cheapest product is always the most economical product. Explain your answer and give example situations. I don't totally agree with the above idea. In general, the cheapest product has low quality, and doesn't last long. If you need to buy some furniture to move out into a new house, and the house is yours, I'd like to recommend to buy some good quality products although the price is not that cheap. Furniture is one of the products that we use for a long time. In this case, I think it's better to buy some good quality products though they are expensive. You might feel that they are not economical for the moment, but I think buying some good quality products is more economical in the long term. Therefore, I can't totally agree with the view that the cheapest product is always the most economical product.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework today. While I do agree with your point here. There are actually some instances when the cheapest products are more economical and would save you a lot of money in the long run.  Thanks for sharing your opinion! Good job! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher. >> CORRECT!  I have a class today. >> CORRECT!  It\'s about multiculturalism. >> CORRECT!  I hope the class won\'t be boring. ^^ >> CORRECT!  I don\'t totally agree with the above idea. >> CORRECT!  In general, the cheapest product has low quality, and doesn\'t last long. >> CORRECT!  If you need to buy some furniture to move out into a new house, and the house is yours, I\'d like to recommend to buy some good quality products although the price is not that cheap. >> If you need to buy some furniture when you move into your new house, I\'d recommend you to buy some good quality products with a reasonable price. Furniture is one of the products that we use for a long time. >> CORRECT!  In this case, I think it\'s better to buy some good quality products although they are expensive. >> CORRECT!  You might feel that they are not economical for the moment, but I think buying some good quality products is more economical in the long term. >> CORRECT!  Therefore, I can\'t totally agree with the view that the cheapest product is always the most economical product. >> CORRECT!  

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